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Tuesday 7 June 2016

Narrative about the haunted house




Character:Jermaine,Kane and Sami


One day Jermaine , Kane and Sami went inside a haunted house. They wanted to know how does a haunted house looks like. Everyone was scared because inside the haunted house was dark and scary. Jermaine said “ Can we go back please?”
Kane and Sami said “No we just came inside the haunted house and  we want to know how does a haunted house looks like?”


As I heard Jermaine screamed “ahhhhhhhh.”
I said “Why are you screaming Jermaine.”
He said “I just saw a ghost.”
I said “What kind of ghost was it.”
He said  “It was an old beautiful man.”
I said “There are a lot of ghosts inside this haunted house”
He said “Where does the ghosts come from.”
I said “When a person dies in a house.”

Then we were walking and as I saw the plants were growing so fast and I was crying. The plant grabbed Kane and Jermaine freaked out.
Kane was screaming “ Come and help me please.”

I ran outside to call someone to help us out of this haunted house. There was two mens talking to each other and I ran to them and asked for help.They came inside the haunted house as they saw the plant were squeezing Kane.

One of the men ran and took the sword that was standing next to the wall. He cut the plant and finally Kane was set free. Then we said “Thank you” to them. They said “You’re welcome” and went outside the haunted house and dealed that we will never go inside a haunted house.I told Kane to don't go too close to a plant near the haunted house.




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3 comments:

Kane said...

Hi my name is Kane good work keep it up

Unknown said...

Good writing Sami

Unknown said...

Hi sami its me alicia excellent work! But isn't jermaine spelt as Jamaine?

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